Wednesday, December 10, 2008

New stuff - In the Time of the Butterflies and the GSE's and concept explanation essay

It is time to move on - I am so glad - enough of that Caesar stuff, eh? So. Did you like In the Time of the Butterflies? I love the novel and feel it is important to read before going to college, as does collegeboard.com. It has been listed as one of the must-reads before college books. It is about rebellion and altruism and courage and imprisonment, of many kinds, and legacy and adversity. These are all themes of the novel. I am sure you can come up with more than this. I now ask you to read the empathy essay on this site and to write a concept explanation essay about yourself, your life and this book as is defined in the assignment I have given you. This is prep work for our research paper we will have to do this year, as well as a satisfaction of the GSE's:
R–10–2
Students identify the meaning of unfamiliar vocabulary by…
R–10–2.1a Using strategies to unlock meaning (e.g., knowledge of word structure including prefixes/suffixes, common roots, or word origins; or context clues; or resources including dictionaries, glossaries, or thesauruses to determine definition, pronunciation, etymology, or usage of words; or prior knowledge)R–10–2.1b Using strategies to unlock meaning including base words, general and specialized print or electronic resources to determine definition, pronunciation, etymology, or usage of words; or prior knowledge R–10–3.2 Selecting appropriate words or explaining the use of words in context, including connotation or denotation, shades of meanings of words/nuances, or idioms; or use of content-specific vocabulary, words with multiple meanings, precise language, or technical vocabulary EXAMPLE: Students might be asked to explain the meaning of terminology appropriate to the content of the subject area as used in a text passage

these are accomplished through the use of your vocab journals while reading the novel and the essay by Azar Nafisi.


Reading skills assessed:
Analysis and interpretation of text - R–10–5.5 Explaining how the author’s purpose (e.g., to entertain, inform or persuade), message or theme (which may include universal themes) is supported within the text R–10–16 Generates a personal response to what is read through a variety of means…R–10–16.1 Comparing stories or other texts to related personal experience, prior knowledge, or to other books R–10–16.2 Providing relevant details to support the connections made or judgments (interpretive, analytical, evaluative, or reflective) R–10–8Analyze and interpret informational text, citing evidence as appropriate by…
R–10–8.1 Explaining connections about information within a text, across texts, or to related ideas EXAMPLE: Students are asked to compare information presented in two textual excerpts. R–10–8.2 Synthesizing and evaluating information within or across text(s) (e.g., constructing appropriate titles; or formulating assertions or controlling ideas) (State)EXAMPLE: How does the title of the article reflect the author’s perspective? R-10–8.3 Drawing inferences about text, including author’s purpose (e.g., to inform, explain, entertain, persuade) or message; or explaining how purpose may affect the interpretation of the text; or using supporting evidence to form or evaluate opinions/judgments and assertions about central ideas that are relevant R–10–8 Analyze and interpret informational text, citing evidence as appropriate by…
R–10–8.4 Distinguishing fact from opinion, and evaluating possible bias/propaganda or conflicting information within or across texts R–10–14.3 Reading multiple texts for depth of understanding an author, subject, theme, or genre

Writing Skills assessed:

W–10–11.4 Writing in a variety of genres W–10–2.3 Connecting what has been read (plot/ideas/concepts) to prior knowledge, other texts, or the broader world of ideas, by referring to and explaining relevant ideas or themes W–10–3.2 Making inferences about the relationship(s) among content, events, characters, setting, theme, or author’s craft EXAMPLES: Making links to author’s choice of words, style, bias, literary techniques, or point of view; making links to characteristics of literary forms or genres W–10–3.3 Using specific details and references to text or relevant citations to support thesis, interpretations, or conclusions W–10–14 In reflective writing, students explore and share thoughts, observations, and impressions by…
W–10–14.1 Engaging the reader by establishing context (purpose) W–10–14.2 Analyzing a condition or situation of significance (e.g., reflecting on a personal learning or personal growth), or developing a commonplace, concrete occasion as the basis for the reflection W–10–14.3 Using an organizational structure that allows for a progression of ideas to develop W–10–14 In reflective writing, students explore and share thoughts, observations, and impressions by W-10–14.4 Using a range of elaboration techniques (i.e., questioning, comparing, connecting, interpreting, analyzing, or describing) to establish a focus W–10–14.5 Providing closure - leaving the reader with something to think about

WHEW!!!! - now that you are totally confused, write down some questions about all this by responding in this blog. Everyone must ask one question about the GSE's listed here to get a 100 on a homework grade! I want to have a conversation about these, a real conversation beyond just why do we have to read and understand these. Ask what one means or how we will accomplish it, or ask how something fits into our curriculum or our school-wide expectations. Remember those? It is all related! Read each others posts, too to see if you can answer any of them. So respond, respond, respond, people!!! I can't wait to read it.


20 comments:

aliciaeh said...
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aliciaeh said...

Whew is right, Ms. Feole! Are we going to accomplish these all in one essay that we are going to write? And it talks a lot about connections between texts or other sources...is In the Time of the Butterflies the only source we will be using? Or will we be connecting more than one piece, tied into our essay?

JuStIn said...

Hey Ms. Feole, just stopping by for my 100 on a hw grade. I had a question similar to Alicia's, but it's somewhat different. Do we have to accomplish at least one of each of the three types of standards: Writing, reading, GSE's? Also, will this be similar to that caste system essay we created, in which we must research true events and facts, and incorporate them in our essays, while comparing them to the story? I was also wondering if on one of the standards, it mentioned comparing the novel to our lives, could it just be using general themes such as courage, adversity, etc.?

Anonymous said...

Wow. That is a LOT of standards. Do we have to address every single one of these standards in this one essay? Or are they to be addressed in the upcoming Research Paper? Also, will we be using Azar Nafisi's essay as a secondary source?

Jenna said...

Okay well that was a little hard to understand! But, I get the feeling that we are writing a personal essay and I had the same name as Alex, are we using the empathy essay in our essay?

GianaM said...

wow that is a lot of words! as i read i tried to relate what we have done in class to all the standards, and i could for most of them! that just shows how much of an AH-MAZING teacher you are. =) you don't expect us to know what we are writing, right? like, you are going to give us other directions?

Dylan Cahir said...

0o0o0o0o0o0o0. My first blog post EVER. how exciting. Hmmm... I'm not sure you can do all of those GSEs in one essay. Especially that one about writing in different genres. How does that work. I don't think I understand all of the other standards either.

Anonymous said...

Hey Ms. Feole, sorry i didn't comment yesterday. So are we basically taking all the books and all the activities we've done and writing an essay about how they're connected to the GSE's? Kind of like those reflection forms we have to fill out for portfolio?

Dana said...

Ms. Feole this is crazy that is a lot of information to put into one essay. Is our outside reading book going to be the other book that we are going to be using... By the way thanks you for letting us read any book that we want!!!!!!

Pasha said...

As far as those standards go, i think i get their gist. Thank you for letting us pick our own book for this upcoming essay/outside reading. The one question that did come up was whether this essay is going to be on any part of our life that we choose, our whole life, or just parts that tie in with the story+essay?

Melaniee said...

Agreed about the whole Caesar thing. But yes, that was a lot of standards for one essay. But i don't understand what this whole In the Time of the Butterflies essay has to do with the research paper.

Anonymous said...

Ouf, Mrs. Feole you are killing me. By the way Dylan i think by different genres it means something different than the usual boring five paragraph essay comparing two works, not two different genres in one essay. I'm lost on the actual assignment though, what exactly are we writing?

Leah said...

WOW! Ms. Feole! That is a lot of GSE's. I was just wondering if we are going to address all of these in one essay or in all the essays that we are going to write through out the year? How is the research paper going to connect with In The Time of The Butterflies (which i loved)? Are you going to explain more of this in class? Are we going to refer back to the empathy essay in our essay?

Anonymous said...

are we incorporating the empathy piece in our essay?

Gina said...

WOW that is a LOT of standards! It's very overwhelming..but my question is almost the same as everyone else's. Do we have to incorporate every one of those standards into this upcoming essay? Or are they just posted so we know what they are. Also, I don't understand how the Empathy essay ties into our next essay. Are we choosing a character from In the Time of the Butterflies to empathize with????? I can't wait to hear answers tomorrow. See you in school!

Gina said...

Hold on - this essay is about another outside reading book of our choice!? That's what I just read in Pasha's comment, so I'm very confused now :/

Anonymous said...

All I can say is I'm really excited for this essay. Finally a creative piece!

Anonymous said...

Holy moly!!! I'm not sure i can use all those GSE's in one essay. They are so long and wordy!! And i had the sme question as alicia, is In the Time of the Butterflies the only source we will be using??

Anonymous said...

I read them, I understand them, I don't care about them.

mightynifty said...

I forgot the question! Uh... what are some of the genres that we are going to be writing in?